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Chapter 1

Posted by Mani;) on April 3, 2014 at 12:50 AM Comments comments (0)

Make a guideline.

- find your subject

-define your purpose

Don't use signal words such as

-report

-summarized

-dscuss

-compare and contrast


consider your audience

-ask who are your readers

-what are the readers expectations

Write down your ideas

-keep a journal

-observe your surroundings

-free writing

-brainstorming

-clustering


Major components of literacy

-invention

-arrangement

-revision

-style

-delivery


Concieve a focus

-a focus will not leep fullu formed into your head


checklist

-how well does the subject of your statement capture the subject of your paper?

-what claim does your statement makes?


schemes for organizing essays

-spatial

-chronological

-general to specific

-specific to general


Unity and Coherence

-do the deas follow a clear sequence

-are the oartsof the essay logically connected


starting to draft

-read over what you've already written

skipping the open and starting in the middle

-start writting the part that's easiest for you


take a break after finishing the draft

ask someone to read and react to your draft

-peer review

-writing center

type a handwritten draft

-outline your draft


revising on word processor

-save your work every five to tn minutes

-after doing any major work on a project save a backup of the file

-save each draft under its on file name


Checklist for revision

-purpose

-focus

-structure


revising strategies for editing

-take a break

-read the draft slowly

-read as if you are encountering the draft


editing on your computer

-dont use spelling or grammer check

-use double space paper copy

-read your work to make sure its error free

-read a printed copy

-read the paper aloud

-ignore content

-place a ruler under each line as you read it


Commenting on others writing

-be sure that you know what the writer is saying

-adress only your most significant concerns

-you are the reader, not the writer

-phrase your comments carefully


Acheiving paragraph coherence

-paragraph organization

-parallism


anything shorter than 100-150 words may feel incomplete

an idea may be developed by one extended or several specifc examples


three basic important guidelines to follow

-leave on space after words

-leave one space after punctuation except dashes and hyphens 

Obama's Memorial Speech For Nelson Mandela

Posted by Mani;) on April 3, 2014 at 12:40 AM Comments comments (0)

This speech given by President Barack Obama is a a tribute to Nelson Mandela. Obama is a great speaker and the fact that he traveled all the way to South Africa to deliver this speech was beyond beautiful.


President Barack Obama was talking about how amazing Nelson Mandela was. Nelson Mandela was a strong individual who fought a very good fight and lead others the right way. President Obama said that Nelson Mandela bought us power of action which I believe is true because even though he passed away, we still remember him and he still have a huge impact on a lot of individuals world wide.


This speech was beyond what words can explain because it showed how much leaders look up to other leaders. I think Nelson Mandela will forever live on just for the fact that he changed a lot of people lives and hs legacy will forever live on.

Marxist Criticism

Posted by Mani;) on March 26, 2014 at 11:30 AM Comments comments (0)

This piece was written to inform readers about Marxist over the world and how it is expressed different.The literature piece said that they usually permit differences in religion, race, ethnicity, and gender to separate them into waring factions that accomplish little or no social change.


It also said that the proletariat will one day develop the class consciousness that is needed to rise up in violent revolution against their oppressors and create a society with no class at all. I agree because at the rate we are going violence is not decreasing, however it is increasing. This literature piece also stated that it had conflict in agreeing and disagreeing on which individuals would be catergorized as a bourgeoisie and which individuasl would be catergorized as a proletariat.


I liked this literature piece because it was very clear on what was being discussed even though it was hard to understand at first.

I Have a Dream

Posted by Mani;) on March 25, 2014 at 12:45 AM Comments comments (0)

This speech said by Martin Luther King Jr. were discussed to express why he feel African Americans shoud have equal rghts, alongside other citizens. He talked about the former history of African Americans in the United States and how Abraham Lincoln treated them


I like how he uses document from history to express himself. For example, he said "We hold these truths to be self evident, that all men are created equally." I used this point because he couldn't have been anymore precise because we all are created equally. Also in the speech he talked about which kind of society that he want his kids to grow up in. He didn't want them facing police brutality as other African Americans did.


I like this speech because its knowledge at its best. I think Martin Luther King will forever live in the United States because he have made uch a big difference in everyones lives, no matter what race you are.

Chapter 4 Presentation

Posted by Mani;) on March 20, 2014 at 12:50 AM Comments comments (0)

Organzing the draft

start off small

titles usually lead the rest of the peice

The beginning of the story is the hardest part to write

Start with an interesting lead

Suggest the purpose without directly saying it

A Letter to America

Posted by Mani;) on March 19, 2014 at 12:10 AM Comments comments (0)

This letter was wrote to show the differences in America from the author's very on experience. Some of the points she talked about were good, however, some points were critqued badly.


She talked about the good and iconic things about America. One of them were indeed Mickey Mouse which have been around for years and not only grabs the attention of children but also adults. Mickey Mouse is all the main attraction of Disney Channel and Disney World which is located in Florida. She also said America let her down because its not how it should be as to where it does not allow the freedom that it should. I personally think its the government fault.


I like this article because America is improving and I believe it earned the name "Home of the brave" beause it has grown so much and it really is the home of the brave. Overall, American history is improving.

Learning the Language

Posted by Mani;) on March 17, 2014 at 1:00 PM Comments comments (0)

This passage is about the language used by doctors and nurses in the medical field and the way that they communicate with patients and others. It talked about how getting new patients are kind of hard to adjust to, or at least that’s what I got from it so they use jargons to make it sound better.


It talked about how they use words to keep the patient as happy as possible. They also talked about the good and bad of using jargons. Doctors use “She boxed last night” which would mean that the patient had died. They also would use “Circling the drain” and they abbreviated it with CTD.


I liked this passage for the fact that doctors really use jargons to kind of foreshadow. Although it has its pros and cons because I feel that they should be straight forward with them but I guess since their job could be so depressing and stressful at points that they try to make the best of it.

 

Professions for Women

Posted by Mani;) on March 12, 2014 at 1:30 AM Comments comments (0)

This article talks about the things women face as being a writer. The author gave real life examples of what she experienced about being a female writer. She talked about how people expectations are different, gender wise. Pretty much how men are masculine and women are feminine.


She talked about the piece that she wrote called Angel of the House in which this discussed how women were supposed to be so unadulterated and humble. However, a lot of women are not like this even though we have some that are. Also she discussed how women have to be careful in what say when they are writing so it’s like they have to express themselves in different ways or wording their statements differently.


I think this article is very similar to the stereotypes that people have against women in politics and a woman trying to become president. Women face a lot of factors in fields like this. Only the st4ong survive.

 

Project 3 Outline and Inquiry Questions

Posted by Mani;) on March 12, 2014 at 12:50 AM Comments comments (0)

Outline

1. Introduction

2. What is Child Development

3. How did I become interested in Child Development

4. Pros of Child Development

5. Cons of Child Development

6. How I view Child Development

7. How People View Child Development

8. Conclusion

Inquiry Questions

1. What is Child Development?

2. How did I become interested?

3. What does MSU require to be specialize in Child Development?

4. How do I view Child Development?

5. Does Child Development play a big role in society?

6. What jobs are you certified to have with a degree in Child Development?

 

Chapter 1

Posted by Mani;) on February 17, 2014 at 11:10 AM Comments comments (0)

Ch. 1

If you see it on google, don’t use it. Try to put more thought into it

If something comes off boring try looking at it from a different angle

Find a list of topics that interest you

Surf the web to find a writing topic

Find a research database

Don’t use a typical or common topic

Examine your assigned topics by using

- People

- Trends

- Controversies

- Places

- Impact

Steps for developing for a working knowledge

- Begin with a google search

- Search general and subject encyclopedias

- Use the internet public library

- Try google scholar

- Build a bibliography

 

Manage your research

A free application on firefox

Developed by George Mason University

Narrow the subject

 

Research Proposal

Reading can be difficult

Good readers have a sense of purpose while reading

 

Reading rhetorically

Selecting reading strategies

Focus on your reading process to become aware of how you do things

The more you read that subject area the less boring it become due to the more you understand

 

 


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